On a peaceful night in June
Wrapped in blankets on a hill
Look to the moon.
The stars will come out soon
We can put them into jars.
On a peaceful night in June
A message from Neptune
And from Mars:
Look to the moon.
It will be quiet soon
Away from the noise of streetcars.
On a peaceful night in June
You can hear the tune,
Seen in the centaurs-
Look to the moon.
The stories heard will make you swoon,
The stars share their memoirs
On a peaceful night in June
Look to the moon.
~ Elara
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